it's....... a start

you read, her WHOLE story Jezz?

OK, thats better, Mines almost oer though. : P I cant think of anything else to write, so haha I dont think I COULD make it any longer! Maybe Ill make some twist so my othrer fan fiction twrils in with the first...

Jester thanx for reading.



"Yeah what of it dirt bag?!" Jezz yelled.

"Oh and she's fiesty! Ku ku ku ku ku!" Naraku said sounding amused.

"You sick B@573rd!" Jezz siad getting more mad.

"Ah so you've heard of me? Oh Inuyasha I'm touched, you talk about me!!!" Naraku annoyingly proclimed.

"I'm sick of you!" Inuyasha said thrusting his Tetsusaigai out of it's sheath.

"Always with the violence......." Naraku said gettin in a fighting stance.

"We'll destroy you." Said Sango calmly. "Father, Kohaku, you will have vengence."

Jezz pulled out her Sword and got ready to attack, Dodger and Kirara biggerfied, Sango was already in her fighting suit and Miroku had his Ofuda charms out.

"Ah Jezz I see you have your new shiney sword. Good good. But I didn't think a Rape victim could fight? I mean they usually they have a thing with being touched. Are you special something?" Naraku said.

Everyone's eyes widened.

"Heh" Naraku said as a slimey tentackle grabbed Jezz's leg. "Now go back......" Naraku pulled the tentacle away.

"What did you do to her!" Miroku asked frantically.

Naraku put on an evil smile.

Jezz layed on the ground clutching her head and her eyes wide opened. "NOOOOOO!!!!! LET GO!!!! PLEASE STOP!!!!" Jezz made desprate cries and sobs for help. Asking some one to stop something..........

"Ku ku ku..." Then all at once Naraku was gone leaving the others with a scared Jezz. She was still shriekig to stop.

"What are we gonna do?" Sango asked.

"Is she posessed by a demon?" Kagome wondered.

"No. I can't smell demon anywhere." Inuyasha told her.

"This is all Jezz. Like us she has a troubled past......and it's traumatized her. Naraku must have her in a state where she is reliving the incident." Miroku explained.

"What will we do?" Shippo asked.

Dodger licked Jezz's face only for it to end up as louder screaming.

"I have a an Ofuda charm to rid all terrible thoughts." Miroku said pulling out an Ofuda charm and putting it on Jezz's head as he prayed. Jezz calmed but was still sobbing and clutching her head.

"Let's get her some where safe" Inuyasha said.

The others agreed and Inuyasha picked up Jezz and headed for the woods.

There they let Jezz sleep with her terrible thoughts.......






NEXT CHAPTER: JEZZ'S PAST UNVEILED!!!!

YUay! anouther update! so happy!

intresting write more soon

XD TY so much for reading!



Jezz's past unveiled! Get out the tissues if you're the emotional type.


Jezz tossed and turned all night. Her little crys for help could be heard. The gang didn't blame her though. they figured she must have been through heck and back from the looks of it. It wasn't really her fault. There was a question on everybody's mind though.......what had happened to her? What did Naraku make her relive?All that was known was that it was terrible.

The next morning all woke up. Jezz was looking quit gloomy and pained. The others saw this and wondered if they should ask her about the incedient later.......

Luckily they didn't have to......

"How does he know about me?" Said a tearing Jezz.

The others were stunned she was actually talking about it. She was stronger than they gave her credit for.

"We don't know." Kagome told her grimly.

"Jezz I suppose that little incedient with Naraku was traumitizing but if you can can you tell us what Naraku meant?" Asked Miroku.

Jezz stared at him with eyes filled with a mixture of fright and agreement. "Yes....." was all she could muster. If she was going to tell this story then she'd have to save her energy.

Jezz sat on a tree stump and the rest sat down on the ground around her.

With a pained look on her face she started her story......

(A/N If I wanted to I could have put a real mean cliffy ther.)

"Three years ago.......I was 11, we lived in a bit of a bad neighborhood. One day I was playing in the yard alone. I remeber seeing a big shadow and then turning around to see a man. He grabbed me and ran off with me. I tried to scream but no one was around and he had my mouth covered." Jezz's voice was cracking a bit. " He blindfolded me and took me to some dingie apartment. I stayed there about a month........the man told me that....that...he'd F--- my brains out every time he came to see me. Out of the month I was there the only missed two days of eating. I only ate when he was there. So....." Jezz voice had again cracked adn her eyes watered. "I kept wishing I was dead. I kept wishing I'd die of starvation that way I wouldn't have to eat and he wouldn't have to come. He kept me tied to a drain pipe in the apartment. it was starnge apartment. It was underground.There was a very small window at the top of the wall. Even the little window was dirty. I could barely see through it. One day I saw a small fury figure outside of it. Luckily he hadn't gotten there yet so I yelled at the figure to get help but I realised it must be an animal. I told myself that I'd die here. Then my fury little hope ran away. Seeing something that moved and wasn't him was the happiest I had felt there. It was my little ray of hope.Then about an hour after I saw the thing he busted in loudly. He then told me how once he was bored with me that he would chop my body into little tiny pieces that way no one will find me or know I'm dead. I didn't care anymore. Death was better then this he!! hole. He was about to get started with me again...but all of the sudden about ten police barged in. They arrested the man and got me back to my family. Then the police informed me that a little fury dog had almost dragged a police officer there. The police officer saw that i was tied up and other things.....so he called for back up and saved me. The gave me the little dog that had saved me and I named him Dodger." Jezz looked lovingly at her hero. "I've had him ever since then. After they had arrested him I thought I was never to be troubled by that agin but.....but.......but" Jezz flung her head in her hands and cried hard. Sha managed to get a few lastwords out though. "He gets parole in a few weeks for good behaviour." Jezz continued to cry in her hands and let her tears fall in her lap.......







I'm curious about what you think.

wow I kinda guessed thats wat happened . but that is very good

Oh thank you so much!

Same here. Oh, and if you wouldve left tat cliffy, I wouldn't have cared because Im too tiired with school and all.

Good job, and all that jazz.

I really like it. It's really cool.
*Kat*

yeah, same here.

Oh Thank you and thanks for reading! ^^

I'll update a little later.

OMG! This is so kewl! I can't believe that I never saw this topic!

XD ZOMG! YAY! Nothingness! You came! I feel so loved! *Cries tears of joy*

uh-huh.... okay you guys are wierding me out here...